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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:36 pm Post subject: My small fanfic |
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Ok well I was bored in school and didn't feel like doing homework so I wrote a small Prison Break related story. Sas made me post it
warning/disclaimer: Do not read this if you have not seen the finale (episode 13) of season 3
So here we go...
“Well, well well what do we have here”, spoke Theodore with his thick Alabama accent as he looked down upon Sucre who was sitting hunched over against the bars of a cell. “How did you drag your ass up here without me noticing?” Sucre looked up and rolled his eyes “just stay away from me T-Bag”. Very little emotion was put into that phrase, in fact he looked like all the emotion had been drained out of him, like he was ready to give up on life. He was beaten and looked like a dejected puppy that you find sitting alone in the dark at the pound. “Now now that’s no way to talk to your new king is it. All it takes is a little bit of money and you can get what you what. Money can buy you what you want.”
“Leave me alone T-Bag, just go away or else.”
“Or else what? See what you don’t seem to register compadré is that you are all alone her. You aient got any body to help you. Pretty sure as hell aient gonna be breaking you out this time, whereas I am in control. I hold the power and I can do you damage”
Sucre didn’t want to deal with T-Bag at that moment. He let out a sigh and slouched down lower. To anyone else he might have looked dead, he was actually beginning to wish that the guards would have killed him. He did not want to go through this again.
“Just remember, I got my eyes on you. I am watching you.”
With that T-Bag left Sucre there surrounded in the dust that was Sona. He brought his knees to his chest, bowed his head down and just let the tears escape his eyes. He didn’t care who would see him. Just one mistake and here he was back in jail, but in a place that already seemed to be ten times worse then fox river. He thought that this place could be tolerable if you had some friends but they were free, on the outside. He had risked his life to keep Michael safe but he would definitely do it again in a heart beat. Michael was his “papi” and he truly cared for him. Sucre knew that he would be alone just by the looks he received on his way in. they were looks of hatred towards him, a man that they did not even know.
He wondered what would have happened had he told the guards were Michael was, had to told Michael that he wasn’t okay. He wondered if they would set him free, probably not, but it never hurt to wonder right?
Thinking of freedom brought his thoughts back to his Maricruz who would surely be showing a slight baby bump. He wondered if he would ever see her again, to hold her in his arms, kiss her all over and never let her go. He prayed that he would one day get to see his soon to be son, his baby boy. Hopefully to hold him in his arms and just watch the tiny miracle before him. He wanted so much to watch him grow, to teach him ball and the tricks to dating. He wanted his son to know him, to look up to him. He just prayed that one day he would be able to see outside of those dreaded Prison walls once again.
Once the tears slowly began to disappear, he stood up, dusted off his clothes and went to explore the place that would be home. At lest for now._________________
Thank you so much Sas for the twilight ava. You dazzle me!!!! LOL |
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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I'm glad you're posting it. Thank you for sharing!!
The last part made me shed a tear, it's so sad.
Good story, dear. ^_^
They are still just writing gay p0rn on Livejournal. lol... it's nice to read something different, that's closer to the actual characters. |
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