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PostPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 7:32 pm    Post subject: Life on the murder scene (Michael and T-Bag slash) Reply with quote

Title: Life on the murder scene
Rating: 18
Genre: Crime/drama/romance
Summary: Michael scofield ends up in Sona, and an affair with someone dangerous soon finds place. And then he has to break out.
Main characters: Michael, T-Bag, Link, Mahone, Bellick, Sucre.

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Chapter 1 - Page 1

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Chapter 1: Entering Sona
Michael’s POV

”From here on you’re on your own.” Is the last word the guard says before he’s being pushed into the gates, where it’s the point of no return; the place called Sona, aka hell.

Taking a last look behind his shoulder, the gates closes in and he’s greeted by the most gruesome smell he’d ever felt in his whole life. It smells of piss and dirt, which is not the best combination…and certainly nothing he was looking forward to smell for the rest of his time locked up in this hell hole.

His eyes widens by the sight in front of him, the most horrible shock so far in his journey; all men lying on the floor covered in dirt, almost beaten to dead and bleeding like hell. Bruised up, swollen and coughing blood ‘til they gag. But one particular man catches his attention as he slowly walks further into the dirty hallway. The man lies on the floor, bleeding more than any of the other men, trying to crawl up from the floor, but fails miserably as he hit the floor back down and moans. The man suddenly looks up at him, looking slightly surprised by his presence, is about to say something but instead twists in pain.

The man was no one else but Bellick. Captain Brad Bellick, the man who had tried everything he could to make his life even more miserable while he stayed in Fox River. No surprise Bellick had tried everything to catch him when he was still a fugitive, and no surprise that it didn’t end very well…Even how sorry he felt for Bellick at this point, he had no time to pity this man, and instead moved his gaze quickly away from the wounded man.
Stepping into the yard the rain was pouring down, making the ground dirty and almost impossible to walk straight on without falling in the dark. It was probably hundreds of men only in the yard, and many of them fighting. It was gruesome, no, worse than that; it was horrible.

He stops dead on his track, not knowing what to do. Looking around himself all he can see is hell. Seriously, it’s hell with the capital h, and it’s not something he’s just making up.
And then all of a sudden, a weird feeling burned at the back of his head. He turned around to spot a pair of big staring eyes looking back at him from across the yard, making him feel slightly uneasy even thought he did all he could to keep calmed. It was Alex Mahone, the man who’d killed his father two weeks ago and had tried to kill him as well.

And now…he was in prison with the killer.

All he could hear was the shouting from the guys, the pouring rain hitting the ground, and the endless screams when someone hit the ground bleeding, cursing and even crying.

Okay so he was definitely no hero, and certainly no God. So what the **** was he gonna do now?

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This was only a short chapter since it´s the first one. We will update as often as possible, and we hope you guys liked it.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I'm totally not a Slash fan at all Laughing But I've taken the plunge & given the first chapter a read. Wink

I think your writing is great, it's very descriptive and you've totally captured the emotion and atmosphere of Sona. I feel sorry for Michael, he feel's so helpless in the Hell hole that's Sona.

Nice work, keep the chapters coming!

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 12:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

^Thank you!
Will update asap, but had completely forgot!



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